Six Sentence Sunday, May 29 (Erik’s Tale)
“Pity!” He overturned a table. “And she kisses him,” he yelled as he threw a porcelain swan at the wall. Erik flung off his hat and peeled the mask from his face. He stared at the mask for a moment, the leering death’s head. If only he could take his own face off so easily.
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This is very good!! Dark… I love it!
Nice snippet!
Very nice writing, week after week. I invite you to take a look at the other participants so more people will find your writing.
Powerful six!
Very strong and descriptive, great six.
Really good writing. I especially like that he wishes he could remove his own face. Nice.
Dark. Strong. Love the snippet
I like dark stuff. Great job.
Best,
Allure Van Sanz
Great six!
Lori
Ah, a tortured, damaged hero. Wonderful. Great Phantom of the Opera vibe going on.
Love the imagery. Poor Erik. His pain and frustration really shine through.
I really liked the scene and the dark character