Six Sentence Sunday, May 1
More Erik’s Tale picking up directly from last week:
The key seemed to grow heavier in her hand. “Don’t talk like that.” She pictured the police dragging him from the Opera, a crowd gathering on the street, and at the intersection a waiting pyre.
“Then don’t leave me,” he said softly.
Christine closed her hand over the key. “You have to promise me something Erik…
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oh no – you left us hanging! Needed more than six this time!
Intense six!
Great snippet!
You can’t leave us hanging like that!
Such ominous words. I wonder where you’ll go from here.
Yes, you deserve a few extra sentences every week. Great stuff.
What does Erik have to promise her. Great hook
Hooked and intrigued. Waiting to hear what promise she extracts from him.
Lots of drama here. I like the feel of the key in her hand. Really draws the reader in.