Six Sentence Sunday, May 13 (Saint of Sinners)
The first thing I noticed was the blood. It was everywhere, standing out against white tile and porcelain. Then my eyes locked on the kid laying in the tub, tears leaking down his face. Not Andre or Tim, or any of the kids from the group home.
It was the bully from Elliot’s school.
“I don’t want to die.”
Read through the last few posts from this story. Not sure what it’s about but it seems interesting.
It’s about the son of the devil going to high school. He deals with things like bullies, romance, trying to fit in, and so on.
Wow! What a vivid scene! Great six.
OK, that’s intense. I don’t know the context, but that makes me want the ten or so paragraphs that lead up to it, and hey what about the beginning of the story, that sets up the scene, and then of course I want to know how it comes out.
Yes, but I only get six sentences. Maybe I’ll post more next week.
Wow, you have such a knack for getting your characters into trouble. I love this twist. I so totally can’t wait to read the whole thing.