Six Sentence Sunday, Dec 4 (Not My Apocalypse)
I won my 5th straight NaNoWriMo with this crazy romp of a story. In this six, Alex fights with his father (the devil):
He hit me so hard I heard my ears ringing and I tasted blood in my mouth. “You will obey me, no matter how many times I have to beat it into you.”
“Cause that’s worked so well before.” It hurt to talk through my busted mouth, but it was worth it. He growled and I kicked out at him again, trying to aim higher. I missed his balls but I connected with his hip.
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December 4th, 2011 at 8:18 am
Instead of “beating the devil out of him” it looks as if just the opposite is the order of the day. Intriguing six for sure.
December 4th, 2011 at 11:29 am
Brief as this is, it has the gritty feel of the real thing. I’m wincing along with him. Yes, this works so well… to cement the defiance.
December 4th, 2011 at 11:39 am
Aiming for the balls is always an excellent tactic, lol. Well done!
December 4th, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Love your voice. I like Alex already–his comeback is fantastic, and you do a great job with the descriptions. Not too much, just enough
Thanks for the great, if brief, read!
December 5th, 2011 at 5:06 pm
Oooh, I love this already!